JonSmisu
05/14/16 02:50PM
Guh. This one was more well liked than I thought. <.<

pastebin.com/BDUQ1sP2

Ogodei-Khan
08/21/16 12:03AM
Got a few to report

www.asstr.org/~Piper/auth...pentmysummervacation.html

Was published recently. Loli (soft loli, 13) and unbirth are the warnings here.

"Lost in Wonderland" was finished a long time ago. Pop over to MCStories and have a looksee.
JksAccount
08/21/16 12:48AM
There is a stories thread here? Why wasn't I aware of this sooner!?
Mindwipe
10/20/16 10:18AM
Here's some <<pastebin.com/xEV6EJbN|TRESH>> I wrote to try and get back into writing. No, it's not related to the sleepover story. No, it's not lewd. Will it be a series? I'unno.
LillyTank
10/20/16 07:43PM
Mindwipe said:
Here's some <<pastebin.com/xEV6EJbN|TRESH>> I wrote to try and get back into writing. No, it's not related to the sleepover story. No, it's not lewd. Will it be a series? I'unno.



That was wonderful, Mindwipe. I really enjoyed reading it. I have some critiques and a few questions but it was an all around enjoyable read. I hope you do produce more like this in the future. By the way, what is "TRESH"?

P.S.
Did you get my D-mail?
Mindwipe
10/20/16 11:51PM
LillyTank said:
By the way, what is "TRESH"?


A silly way of saying "trash" that I picked up from watching Vinny of Vinesauce. (Though I'm pretty sure he's referencing Danny DeVito of It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia when he says it.)
Pinkanator
10/20/16 11:53PM
Mindwipe said:
A silly way of saying "trash" that I picked up from watching Vinny of Vinesauce. (Though I'm pretty sure he's referencing Danny DeVito of It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia when he says it.)


MINDWIPE WATCHES MR PIZZAPASTA?!?
LillyTank
10/21/16 12:03AM
Mindwipe said:
A silly way of saying "trash" that I picked up from watching Vinny of Vinesauce. (Though I'm pretty sure he's referencing Danny DeVito of It's Always Sunny in Philadelphia when he says it.)


Well for what ever it's worth I don't think your work is trash in the least. I really do hope that you make more.
Bobbette
10/21/16 01:54AM
LillyTank said:
Well for what ever it's worth I don't think your work is trash in the least. I really do hope that you make more.


I fully concur. Erotic/lewd work or not, that was a wonderful story and made me smile a little. Good work Mindwipe, amazing stuff.
Mindwipe
10/21/16 02:21AM
Pinkanator said:
MINDWIPE WATCHES MR PIZZAPASTA?!?


Vincent "Vinny" Pizzapasta is one of my favorite streamers. I don't often catch his streams live, but I always watch the ones I'm really interested in on his Full Sauce channel the day after.

LillyTank said:
That was wonderful, Mindwipe. I really enjoyed reading it. I have some critiques and a few questions but it was an all around enjoyable read. I hope you do produce more like this in the future.


LillyTank said:
Well for what ever it's worth I don't think your work is trash in the least. I really do hope that you make more.


Bobbette said:
I fully concur. Erotic/lewd work or not, that was a wonderful story and made me smile a little. Good work Mindwipe, amazing stuff.


Thanks for the compliments. Even though I wasn't super happy with it, it's more important to me that other people enjoyed it. And critiques and questions are welcome. I could potentially make this into a series if there's a desire for it. Edge has tried to get me to post my stories to itch.io and activate donations. Is that something people think I should do? Would anyone donate for more sappy, hastily-written hypno stories?
LillyTank
10/21/16 03:28AM
Mindwipe said:
Thanks for the compliments. Even though I wasn't super happy with it, it's more important to me that other people enjoyed it. And critiques and questions are welcome. I could potentially make this into a series if there's a desire for it. Edge has tried to get me to post my stories to itch.io and activate donations. Is that something people think I should do? Would anyone donate for more sappy, hastily-written hypno stories?


I certainly would donate what little I could for it.
bullet
10/21/16 07:42AM
I prefer Joel! He seems more random and unpredictable to me. And that accent...
JonSmisu
10/22/16 04:35AM
Mindwipe said:
Thanks for the compliments. Even though I wasn't super happy with it, it's more important to me that other people enjoyed it. And critiques and questions are welcome. I could potentially make this into a series if there's a desire for it. Edge has tried to get me to post my stories to itch.io and activate donations. Is that something people think I should do? Would anyone donate for more sappy, hastily-written hypno stories?


Hey, it was cute! I liked it, even if it felt a tad stiff in places. But if it was hastily written, that makes sense.

Sadly, I'm not in a position to donate, though I'll happily read anything you put out. :)
EoD
10/22/16 04:48AM
bullet said:
I prefer Joel! He seems more random and unpredictable to me. And that accent...


He's actually been losing his accent. Watch some of his early stuff and his accent is so thick it can be hard to understand him. It seems being constantly exposed to America has worn away at his accent. It's still noticeable, but for example when he says his name it comes out as Joel instead of Yoel.
bullet
10/22/16 09:41AM
EoD said:
He's actually been losing his accent. Watch some of his early stuff and his accent is so thick it can be hard to understand him. It seems being constantly exposed to America has worn away at his accent. It's still noticeable, but for example when he says his name it comes out as Joel instead of Yoel.


If he can still say "desktop strippers" the same, i can live with that.
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